A story is entertaining. But it can also hold
glimpses of history, geography, culture, art… It can spark discussions from simple,
everyday things to more difficult, larger issues. So, what better way to mark
Teachers’ Day than by exploring imaginative ways in which a children’s book can
transform a class.
Every book has its ‘teachable’ moments. And often they are most unexpected, as Adithi Rao discovers when she used her book Noon Chai and a Story for a creative writing workshop for nine-year-olds with minds of their own and some very eye-opening questions!
Together Alone
by
Adithi Rao
To me as, perhaps, to other writers,
writing is an ‘alone’ process. Yet, it is never lonely, for it thrums with lives and spaces so vital and immediate
that I am left in no doubt of their actual existence (if only in some alternate reality!).
NoonChai and a Story is a product of my travels through tiny villages in the high reaches of the Himalayas many summers ago, coupled with stories I read about or heard from the people there of a life divided by “a line that nobody could see but everybody spoke of”. The protagonist of the book is Amiya, a young girl of the Dardic tribe, living in the valley of Gurez in Kashmir. This child, like the rest of her classmates, seeks to turn the library-of-one-book in her school, into a library-of-many.
But, how? For, Gurez is a lonely little place with few books, and lots and lots of snow! It is Amiya’s Deidi, her laughing, wise, lovable grandmother, who saves the day. She recounts a story of a husband long separated by a line that was carelessly scratched upon a map one August day in 1947, while he was over at Gilgit trading his harvest of potatoes for the apples that grew there. He never could return, for between him and his home now stood that shadow line guarded by men with guns.
Amiya writes down Deidi’s story, her
sister illustrates it, and the pages are stitched together to form the second
book to adorn the shelf of the school library! Inspired by Amiya, her
classmates too gather stories from their elders over delicious cups of salty
pink noon chai. And thus, one homemade book after the other makes its way onto that
library shelf over a long and difficult winter…
Noon Chai and a Story seemed like a pleasant, simple enough book to me, one I was keen for children to read. And so, I accepted with alacrity when I was asked to use this book as a part of a creative writing summer workshop for a group of nine-year-olds. Together, the children and I learnt many things. They, that stories may be told in countless different ways. And me, that no matter how it is told, a tale like Noon Chai… can never be simple.
After I read the book out loud to the
children, keeping my tones expressive and animated to grab their interest, I
looked up expectantly for their response.They gazed back at me, utterly bewildered.
One young gentleman opened and closed his mouth a few times before finally exclaiming:
“I don’t see what all the fuss is about! Why couldn’t that silly husband just
take a flight and come back home to Deidi? People do travel between India and
Pakistan, you know?”
I was at a complete loss for words.
“Sounds like that fellow just did not
want to return!” he added, in his practical, no-nonsense way.
Another child observed that Amiya and
her friends could have just bought
the books. “Why go through so much trouble making them?” she shrugged. There
were other questions, too, of course. Deidi’s husband, the one who went away,
was her cousin. “Who marries their cousin? Chee!” cried some of the other
children.
I realised, at that moment, that it
was time to step out of my head and join my readers out there in the real
world. To view the story from their eyes rather than my own complacent ones.
Like I said, writing is an alone
process…
I took it one question at a time. Well,
people do marry their cousins and even their maternal uncles in many cultures
across India. It is not a practice confined to any one religion, but a common
way of life among many.
Next, digging up maps of the Silk Road
(from the 2nd century BCE to the 18th century CE, Gurez Valley had been the bustling
portal into Central Asia on that famous trading route), and the Kashmir Valley
of modern India, I showed my students how the line of control cut right through
the head of the country, so close to Guerez. I did my best to illustrate the
difference between an LOC and an international border, and the implications of
each. Together, we explored what it must be like to live so close to that
invisible line, marked by guns and barbed wire fences. We tried to imagine the
life of a child of Dardic origin, whose world is buried under twenty feet of
snow for close to half of every year; children whose education is routinely
interrupted by winters, curfews and threats of militancy. Theirs is a world
with no internet or phones (smart or otherwise), no malls to shop in or bookstores
to browse through at leisure.
Painting such a picture for my students
needed me to fully imagine it myself. Doing so was one of the most poignant experiences
of my life. After all, the lives of others, when seen through our own
realities, will eternally remain beyond the reach of our puny imaginations.
In the workshops and storytelling
sessions that followed this one, I arrived forearmed with maps, charts and
photographs that would help set the tone of the very layered and complex
histories of the people of Kashmir, before venturing to read Noon Chai and a Story. It had dawned on
me by then that children live in their own unique worlds, shaped by their
socio-economic backgrounds and the cultural ethos of the spaces in which they
live and grow. So, I must first gently and completely ease them into the world
of Amiya before her story can become relevant and relatable to them.
The easy-on-the-eyes, affectionate illustrations by Ghazal Qadri have been an effective counterpoint to the grim undertones of conflict, separation and loss that run right through the book. I’ve enjoyed using them to show bits of artistic Kashmir life to children during my sessions.
That first workshop was something of
an awakening. A wake-up call to the aloneness of people, even while we believe
that we are part of a common world. My students had been alone in their
perceptions of a life made up of traffic jams, international schools and books
that can be ordered online. I too had been alone in my assumption that Noon Chai and a Story would immediately
transport my readers to the world of the story. The children of the Gurez
Valley, living their lives away from the eyes of the world, are alone too.
(They probably never imagined that somewhere, a group of people had come
together in cyberspace to read and discuss a story about them!)
And in the middle, holding these three
Alones and bringing them all together across time, space and cultures, is a
book, quietly telling its tale. Perhaps this, then, is the power of the written
word…
Quite at the other end of the
spectrum, I sent a copy of the book for the children of Muskaan. An NGO based
out of Bhopal, Muskaan works with children of vulnerable slum communities that
do not have access to mainstream education. Accompanying the book was, of
course, out of the question. Amiya would have to go forth and tell her story
the best she could. To my absolute delight, I was later informed that the
children loved the book. ‘Amiya is just like us!’ they said. ‘We make our own
books too!’
India on a Motorcycle - made it to the Parag Honour List 2021) and short stories for numerous anthologies.
She was assistant director for the Hindi film Satya, and the rights to her film script, Baraf,
have been sold to Aamir Khan Productions Ltd.
She is currently scripting a play for Katkatha Puppet Arts Trust.
You can find her at adithirao.com.
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